Claire - there are a number of things I think we should work to improve if possible over the next few days. Title - I think this would be better placed horizontally (I understand the reasons why you wanted it slightly canted, but I think as a title it would be better either canted more (so it appears more deliberate) or not at all. Is the font the same as the film? If not, it does need to be - I'll look at the film font again in a moment. The billing block is not conventional (you need to use the one on the k drive which is interactive (under Media A2 and posters) and this just needs the relevant information for your film. The actors' names at the top and the ratings or reviews need to be moved around - and why not include a quote from your review for LWL? See me to discuss this more.
Claire - there are a number of things I think we should work to improve if possible over the next few days.
ReplyDeleteTitle - I think this would be better placed horizontally (I understand the reasons why you wanted it slightly canted, but I think as a title it would be better either canted more (so it appears more deliberate) or not at all. Is the font the same as the film? If not, it does need to be - I'll look at the film font again in a moment. The billing block is not conventional (you need to use the one on the k drive which is interactive (under Media A2 and posters) and this just needs the relevant information for your film. The actors' names at the top and the ratings or reviews need to be moved around - and why not include a quote from your review for LWL? See me to discuss this more.