A few things here you should try to improve - the ratings part is not presented correctly (look at the print pages of LWLs again and try to improve this). There's also a typo on anticipation which you need to correct. Check for any others. The dropped cap is too big I think - again, look closely at the examples and try to improve this.
A few things here you should try to improve - the ratings part is not presented correctly (look at the print pages of LWLs again and try to improve this). There's also a typo on anticipation which you need to correct. Check for any others. The dropped cap is too big I think - again, look closely at the examples and try to improve this.
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