I'm glad to see this now, but you do need to check your use of terms. You have used the term 'pan' incorrectly at least twice and this will need to be corrected. You can do this by uploading a post to correct the commentary on your blog, but you should really re-record the commentary. It's this kind of thing that takes time, and the reason why things need to be done by the deadline.
It's essential that there is an animatic version with shot timings. Your commentary could have done this, but it doesn't, you'll need to add a shot list now that has timings for each shot and adds up to 5 mins.
I'm glad to see this now, but you do need to check your use of terms. You have used the term 'pan' incorrectly at least twice and this will need to be corrected. You can do this by uploading a post to correct the commentary on your blog, but you should really re-record the commentary. It's this kind of thing that takes time, and the reason why things need to be done by the deadline.
ReplyDeleteIt's essential that there is an animatic version with shot timings. Your commentary could have done this, but it doesn't, you'll need to add a shot list now that has timings for each shot and adds up to 5 mins.
ReplyDeletePlease reformat your blog so that you get the archive side bar appearing properly.
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